Good Work
But it could be a little bit louder maybe?
A change of idea in the middle to create a bridge would make it better.
I know these things can take time.
Keep at it and you will do well =)
Good Work
But it could be a little bit louder maybe?
A change of idea in the middle to create a bridge would make it better.
I know these things can take time.
Keep at it and you will do well =)
thanks for the advice
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